http://tub-r.com/2007/10/04/the-price-of-having-a-second-chance/ Think, Utilize, Behold, Respect Thu, 13 Aug 2009 05:16:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://tub-r.com/2007/10/04/the-price-of-having-a-second-chance/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Criz Lai Thu, 29 Nov 2007 17:35:42 +0000 http://tub-r.com/2007/10/28/the-price-of-having-a-second-chance/#comment-2 Not bad about the willingness to change for the better. The story line is good but rather wordy and confusing as too many characters are involved. Maybe shortening it about 30% will be ideal. Good try anyway and keep it up. Not bad about the willingness to change for the better. The story line is good but rather wordy and confusing as too many characters are involved. Maybe shortening it about 30% will be ideal. Good try anyway and keep it up.

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